Monday, June 10, 2019

I Should Be Laughing: The Bottle Tree


Her hands were propped on top of the pickets. The winds had weathered the wood so much that the spiny ends were almost elastic. Renny leaned back, holding onto the fence, and pushed her shoes into the firm grasses next to the bottom rail. Her socks had fallen to her ankles from playing kickball at recess and scuffmarks scarred the tops of her patent leather shoes; grass stains clung to the hem of her new dress because she sat on the lawn after class. Renny rocked forward, bouncing up and down on the fence, and felt the starched dress scratch the back of her thighs. This was the best spot in town, she thought, having recently discovered the house on a long walk home from school. All the days she had come down this street and never seen the bottles in the tree.

It wasn’t a tall tree, compared to those on the mountainside, the giant one’s people called redwoods. This one wasn’t even as tall as the tree in her yard, but it was by far the prettiest tree she had ever seen, because of the bottles.

Glass bottles of all shapes and colors had been strung along every branch. Enormous blue ones, as big around as a tetherball, and others, long and red. Crimson, she wondered. Wasn’t crimson red? Those were square on the bottom and rounded at the top. Green ones, too, hand blown she would learn, and yellow bottles colored like pee, Renny thought with a giggle. Pebbles from the beach filled the clear ones.

The bottles played in the daylight, especially as the sun headed toward night on her long walk home from school, gathering up the sunlight and scattering it around the yard in dots of red and yellow, blue and green. Spots of light landed on her face and arms, looking like measles, only nicer.

Every afternoon Renny came by this house, two doors down from the church, to lean on the fence and admire the glass. Every day she dawdled along the road, stopping to count the bottles, counting slowly so that when she finally arrived home, Daddy would be there, and she wouldn’t be alone with Mother. The bottles saved her from that.

One…two…three. Renny counted as she bounced. Four…five…six. Oh! A purple one! That hadn’t been there yesterday. Renny marveled at the plum colored glass scratched through with tiny cracks like a spider’s web. Twenty…twenty-one. The winds kicked up and the bottles began to dance. Clinking together, they started singing sweetly and calling out her name. Eye-rene. Eye-rene. Thirty-seven…thirty-eight. Birds nesting on the highest limbs chirped along with the symphony of glass.

“Pretty, aren’t they?”

”Oh.” Renny smiled at the man who returned her grin with a gap-toothed one of his own. Two teeth were missing on the bottom. “Hi Mister Dailey.”

“Afternoon Irene. How was school?”

“Okay, I guess,” she said quietly. The only clouds around were those on her face. Then her eyes became glossy and she pointed toward her discovery. “You got a new bottle Mister Dailey. The purple one…way…up there….”

Roger Dailey turned to look where the tiny fingers aimed and, sure enough, a purple bottle hung from the tree. Lavender crackled glass. “That’s my favorite.” Renny declared, her face speckled with color. “When did you put it up there?”

Dailey shook his head. “I told you, Irene, these ain’t my bottles. Every so often, I come home to find a new one hangin’ in my tree.  But I’ve never heard anyone out here, climbing up there and stringing the bottles to it.”

Renny looked at him with awe. How could he not hear someone tying bottles to his very own tree? Yet, he was always as surprised as she was when a new one appeared. Even today, he couldn’t take his eyes off the purple one; the lacy glass wafting above his head.

“Well,” Renny said matter-of-factly, “I think it’s the prettiest one ever and I hope they never stop coming by with new ones…. Whoever they are.”

“Me too, Irene.” Dailey smiled at her, the space in his teeth apparent but friendly. “How many did you count today?”

“Thirty-eight,” she answered proudly.

8 comments:

  1. Very descriptive! I could almost hear the bottles jangle. X

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  2. Very nice,
    Now, how did you find such a perfect image to go with it?

    XoXo

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  3. Reminds me of a tree out in the middle of
    Oregon sage desert. Has pairs of shoes
    hanging all over it. A landmark to check
    off on your way south.

    I've been thinking of this all morning
    and I think I'll add an 'ak!' to my comment.

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  4. That's a nice little bit.

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  5. I love the imagery.

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  6. @Sixpence
    My sister once told me of a bottle tree she saw while visiting or grandmother; not like those metal trees, but a rel one. That's where and why I put this piece in the story. But I was lucky enough to find a REAL bottle tree on Google images and so there it is.

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  7. Thank you for sharing your brilliance. A beautiful, touching, and beautifully written story.

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